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#MFRWhooks Blog Hop - Excerpt from FIRST AND AGAIN - Welcome to Paradise

It's Book Hooks time again! Today I'm offering an excerpt from FIRST AND AGAIN that I call "Welcome to Paradise." When Bridget's marriage and business both fail, she and her teenage daughter load up their car and head to Paradise, North Dakota, Bridget's hometown. It's a place she swore she'd never return to. Her first evening in Paradise she's working in her mother's bar and has a run-in with an old nemesis from high school:


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Excerpt:

Tina had always had a knack for finding her weak spots and going straight for the jugular. Bridget’s only hope was to show no fear.


“That’s okay, Celia,” she said. She turned to Tina with what she hoped was a composed expression on her face. “The business went under.”


“Really? What a shame. What went wrong?”


The massive lawsuit might have had something to do with it. “It was probably the downturn in the economy.”


“That’s too bad. And I understand your husband left you after that.”


Her heart dropped into her stomach. She lifted her eyes to Tina’s and in that moment she hated the woman. Though Tina’s face was the picture of innocent inquiry, the predatory gleam in her eyes revealed the enjoyment she took in asking these humiliating questions.


“It was an amicable split.”


“But to leave you without any money and then to take up with a younger woman. Well, that’s just too much.”


She heard her sister’s sharp intake of breath before an embarrassed hush fell over the group.


“Knock it off, Tina,” Jack said.


Tina gave him an indignant glare. “I was just trying to express my sympathy for Bridget’s situation.”


He didn’t look convinced. “Sympathy, my ass.”


Bridget glanced at the horrified expression on her sister’s face. In a moment of weakness, she’d phoned and confided the circumstances of her divorce to Celia. How could Tina have known Ben had left her for a woman fifteen years younger unless Celia had told her? Was this how sisters treated each other? Did one betray confidences and then sit back and watch while the other was publicly humiliated and ridiculed?


She could never trust her again.


Gavin coughed self-consciously. He and the others at the table appeared uncomfortable, but she was past caring about anyone else’s discomfort. Anger welled up inside her, anger at Tina, at Celia, at Ben, at the world in general.


“It’s okay, Jack. Tina’s right. My husband did dump me for a younger woman. But hey, my life’s an open book. Maybe there are other details of my personal life you’d like to discuss. Perhaps you want to know my bra size or maybe my bank account balance, though I’ve got to warn you, neither is very big. Go ahead, ask me anything.”


They stared at each other for what seemed like ages until Tina shook her head, looking chastised.


“You’re right, it’s none of my business,” she said, sounding remorseful. “I just wondered what brought you back to Paradise after all these years.”


There were many reasons for coming home—poverty, hopelessness, a broken heart. But she had no intention of baring her soul to Tina Wilson.


“I came back to Paradise because I need some space. And plenty of privacy.”


She turned away, her hands shaking as she clutched the empty glasses, but not before she caught what looked like amusement in Jack Davison’s eyes. His expression made her even angrier. How dare he laugh at her?


The glasses clinked together as she haphazardly loaded them into the dishwasher behind the bar. One night in Paradise and she’d already been humiliated. Welcome home, Bridget. If she had enough money for gas and if she thought her old Chevy could withstand the return trip, she’d pack up her daughter and their few meager possessions and head back to San Francisco. Why on earth had she ever come back here?


The answer was simple. She had no place else to go


Couple embraces in a sunlit field, appearing content. Book title "First and Again" by Jana Richards in bold lettering above them.

Blurb:

Bridget Grant is back in Paradise. Paradise, North Dakota, that is.

 

She’s swallowed her pride and moved back to her hometown with her daughter after her divorce and the loss of her catering company. Now she’s trying to navigate the strained relationships she’d left behind – including her first love, Jack Davison.

 

Jack never forgot Bridget, or the day she left town – and him. When Bridget caters a lunch at Jack’s tourist ranch, old flames reignite. They have more in common than ever – Jack’s also a single parent. Though they both try to keep things casual, Bridget, Jack and their girls are starting to look a lot like a family.

 

But Bridget’s only planning to stay in Paradise until she’s saved enough to relaunch her business. Jack’s invested too much in his ranch to leave. And with their daughters involved both have a lot more at stake than heartbreak. How can they risk falling in love?



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7件のコメント


Reggi Allder
a day ago

Jana, a nicely done blog and excerpt! Love the cover too. :)

いいね!

Maggie Blackbird
a day ago

OMG this line says it all about Tina!! “That’s too bad. And I understand your husband left you after that.”

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ゲスト
a day ago

Hi,

I like your Blurb and your excerpt drew me in.

Shalom shalom

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kayelleallen
2 days ago

Oh I absolutely loved her comeback! That was classy and well done.

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Jana Richards
2 days ago
返信先

If only I could think of comebacks like that in my real life! Thanks Kayelle!

いいね!

Lisabet Sarai
2 days ago

This is a fabulous excerpt, Jana. Very realistic and engaging.

いいね!
Jana Richards
2 days ago
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Thanks Lisabet. Much appreciated!

いいね!
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